and i wait, silently wishing

time would stop

so that i may

continue living

in a world apart

from today

1/23/2009 11:20:18 PM

LOL

do you cry when you beat your dick?

[Edited on January 23, 2009 at 11:22 PM. Reason : d]

1/23/2009 11:21:46 PM

bro...

this is my poetry

embrace in its glory

and copmrehend its complexity

beyond your eyes into the third

and then you will see

what it truly means to be me

1/23/2009 11:22:58 PM

Quote :

"LOL do you cry when you beat your dick?"

1/23/2009 11:27:30 PM

hahah....let me read it again.

ok, i think i answered my own question



pppfffhhaahaa...boy, you be so silly

1/23/2009 11:27:38 PM

Crimson drops of shame

bleeding the pain

little rivulets of hate...

drained from my vein.

A puddle of me corroded the floor.

dripped from wrist pooling before the door

Shut out, shooed away

he died alone that day

Time passed slowly,

fear set in,

hope began to fade

life withered within.

by crackmonkey

1/23/2009 11:43:10 PM

and i wonder

I'm Big Business and i approved this message.

1/23/2009 11:45:17 PM

> wait

Time passes.

> wiat

Beg pardon?

STUPID FUCKING GO...

1/23/2009 11:47:57 PM

Hey, this looks like fun...let me try.

Smelly, hairy Russian vaginas

Oozing cottage cheese

While Taiwanese midgets

Insert red-hot pokers

And stretch apart the lips

So that newborn piglets

May crawl inside

And die.

1/23/2009 11:48:15 PM

yeah.....ya know it's not that yalls poems suck, it's just that your format sucks....the pauses are no good, there is no rhythm....Just read it out loud, and youll see what i mean. You could make them so much better with out even changing the words. ...How you govern your lines/punctuation will convey how it is meant to be read by the reader (not you).

i took a poetry class in college. I KNOW WHAT I"M TALKING ABOUT!!!

[Edited on January 23, 2009 at 11:59 PM. Reason : u]

1/23/2009 11:56:31 PM

roses are...uh, no

um, uh aw

here i sit, broken hearted

pay the quarter....you got a quarter?

1/23/2009 11:57:04 PM

like so many other threads, including my own, this one needs a nice plump ass

1/24/2009 12:01:27 AM

Oh crap this is a poetry thread? UGH

TWW doesn't produce valuable culture, so I'm just gonna write this one off.

1/24/2009 12:03:29 AM

like i said earlier, i took a poetry class in college, just to get an easy A and it turned out to be so much fun.

Every Tuesday, it would be two person's turn to read there poem aloud and everyone else would get a copy of there poem to critique, write notes, and would be returned for them to review at the end of there reading.

I always liked writing notes to them, and signing someone elses name from the class. Just like lame flirty notes....I got a kick out of it..

1/24/2009 12:10:38 AM

simonn stood you up for lunch again i see

1/24/2009 12:14:15 AM