cddweller All American 20699 Posts user info edit post |
Big old moon leering at the traffic Red and white eyes are holographic You seem so zealous And I'm so fucking jealous Helping our demons to become graphic
You can oversee all the rat races Meanwhile you pierce hidden places What gave you the right To reserve your light For transforming the strangest of faces?
My rage you cool and soothe My ghosts you swiftly remove Your divine shower Refills sexual power Show us we have nothing to prove 7/17/2008 11:07:12 PM |
Kiwi All American 38546 Posts user info edit post |
Keep pouring gas on the fire. I could bury your ass in about two seconds. 7/17/2008 11:07:43 PM |
Ernie All American 45943 Posts user info edit post |
I stopped when I saw you rhymed traffic with holographic 7/17/2008 11:07:59 PM |
raiden All American 10505 Posts user info edit post |
well it rhymes. so good job!! 7/17/2008 11:08:37 PM |
cddweller All American 20699 Posts user info edit post |
Why thankee Rhymezone NOT YOU WE NAMED THE MONKEY RHYMEZONE 7/17/2008 11:10:55 PM |
cynosural All American 9870 Posts user info edit post |
is this the limerick format?
aabba? i cant remember 7/17/2008 11:13:10 PM |
cddweller All American 20699 Posts user info edit post |
No. You're wrong. 7/17/2008 11:13:27 PM |
cynosural All American 9870 Posts user info edit post |
k i read it all...it doesnt make any sense 7/17/2008 11:14:40 PM |
cddweller All American 20699 Posts user info edit post |
lol 7/17/2008 11:14:59 PM |
Spontaneous All American 27372 Posts user info edit post |
There once was an internet chick who had a good taste in flicks Her poems were decent and fairly frequent but she could only write limericks 7/17/2008 11:17:43 PM |
cddweller All American 20699 Posts user info edit post |
awesome! 7/17/2008 11:44:49 PM |
Walls1441 All American 10000 Posts user info edit post |
Quote : | "There once was an internet chick who had a good taste in flicks Her poems were decent and fairly frequent
but she could only write limericks supposedly she sucks great dick" |
7/18/2008 12:28:42 AM |
Gamecat All American 17913 Posts user info edit post |
keep writing
this reads like a practice poem 7/18/2008 1:36:52 AM |
cddweller All American 20699 Posts user info edit post |
I need to post like this more often. 7/19/2008 1:41:58 AM |